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i remember the joy

i remember the field
and the poppies colored with sesame-oil

i remember the sky
and the clouds as thick and sleepy
as the june haze that hung around us

i remember the girl
and the spots on her face
like a fairy had sprinkled cinnamon on her cheeks
and dropped liquid gold into her irises

i remember the clouds
and their sky of a delicate passionate blue
filled with the essence of the world's joys and tears

i remember the poppies
and the field of lush acid green

i remember the joy






and what a joy...
:icongingerspice019:

Author's Comments

Well hear you are - every cliche in the book in a neat 17-line package, including fairies.

i misread the line "and what an afternoon" in someone else's deviation as "and what joy". this is what came

original title - "fleeting evanescent days"

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:iconsilver-scorpian:
i misread the line "and what an afternoon" what line?

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"Behind every great man.... is a great woman, laughing her ass of at him."
:icongingerspice019:
on some other deviation (not one of mine)

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...which roughly translates to I want to get into your underpants. :eyes:
:iconsilver-scorpian:
ah.

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"Behind every great man.... is a great woman, laughing her ass of at him."
:icongingerspice019:
;)

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...which roughly translates to I want to get into your underpants. :eyes:
:iconzutarafan401:
beautiful!

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Yo Momma is so fat, That even Naruto doesnt BELIEVE IT!

I have a freakin. yaoi. HAT.
Its epic. It has a rainbow and everything.

Yes I'm a Christian... Will that be a Problem?
:icongingerspice019:
thanks! :love:

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...which roughly translates to I want to get into your underpants. :eyes:
:iconvetchvespers:
Beautiful imagery, and I don't think it's cliche. :)

What about "Poppy Summer?"

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-Quod me nutrit me destruit-
:icongingerspice019:
Thanks!!

Ooh! That's a good one! 8O

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...which roughly translates to I want to get into your underpants. :eyes:
:iconzutarafan401:
welcome! :hug:

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Yo Momma is so fat, That even Naruto doesnt BELIEVE IT!

I have a freakin. yaoi. HAT.
Its epic. It has a rainbow and everything.

Yes I'm a Christian... Will that be a Problem?

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